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A john wick inspired sketch. I know its short but i am working on it.  

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JakePlecas
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16/06/2019 3:05 am  

Please give me suggestions on how to make a fight scene like this flow better. 


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Mistery1307
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17/06/2019 8:28 pm  

Maybe not have the music be the main audio focus, add some sound effects, muzzle flashes need to be bigger, and individual scenes themselves need to be longer, maybe instead of hard cuts, add shots where the camera pans to the other person.

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JakePlecas
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18/06/2019 12:15 am  

thanks, we would have liked to pan but we only had two people.


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Mistery1307
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27/06/2019 12:04 am  

The muzzle glow is also too orange, tone that down.

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Chris Kelly
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05/07/2019 10:36 pm  

That in - camera transition using the wall was cool!


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JakePlecas
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06/07/2019 11:48 am  

Thanks!


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ermiasbaraki
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19/07/2019 9:31 pm  

Well done, over all. Add some sound effects next time. Keep at it 🙂


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JakePlecas
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24/07/2019 12:28 am  

thanks cobber


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